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      48 hours in emo heaven. (DETAILED) (Girls only unless your gay/bi)

   So my parents are gone and I tell you that I'm having a party. You don't want to come but your boyfriend just broke up with you for your sister/brother(brother if your gay) so you come to try to get over him. You get to my house late so congratulations you get to go first.....

You reach in the hat and pull out number one and no one stands up. So you go to get another number then suddenly you feel someone breathing down your neck. You get the chills and stand up and see a gorgeous emo boy with brown hair and snake bites behind you. You almost faint from how gorgeous he is but he catches you before you fall. He escorts you to the closet and you too sit down on the floor and talk (so you can get to know eachother before you do anything) You tell him your upset because of your ex(Jon) so he comforts you. He tells you how he doesnt have a family and that he knows how to take care of someone the way that they deserve to be taken care of. You turn and look deep into his beautiful greyish blue eyes and right as you go to tell him how much you like his eyes he kisses you with as much passion as your ex. You get a little upset then start to realize that he is a much better kisser then your ex. So you loosen up and remember that you have 48 hours with him so you gently take off his shirt and he takes of yours. He starts kissing your neck and you start to take off his jeans. You remember that you have a condom in your skirt pocket so you take it out and he stops kissing you for a minute. You ask whats wrong and he says he doesnt want to rush things because he is starting to fall in love with you more then he already was. You say you understand. He says he also doesnt want to be your rebound. You start crying because you had forgotten about Jon completely then he brought him back up. You slowly put your shirt back on and sit in the corner of the closet and Alex says come on baby lets go to my house and we can talk there. So you leave the party and go to his house. He tells you how sorry he is for making you cry then....YOUR PHONE RINGS... guess who it is?!?! Its Jon he was apoligizing for breaking your heart and hooking up with your sibling and that he wants you back you have a major breakdown in the car and it causes you to have a panic attack. Alex runs off the road to try to take care of you and he gets on the phone with jon and says look _______ is my girlfriend/boyfriend now they is done with you so if I ever find out you hurt them I will personally Kill you. Then hangs up. He looks over at you and sees that you passed out from anxiety and kisses you trying to wake you up(like a fairy tale) you dont wake up so he takes you back to his house and lays you in his bed he does everything he can to keep you safe and ok. You wake up at about 1:30 in the morning and see Alex laying next to you with tears running down his face. You lift up his chin and he gets so excited and kisses you with even more passion then he did when you were in the closet. He asks you if your ok and you say yes you just have trouble with stress. He says ok then he says well did you atleast hear what I said to your ex last night you say no and he says well I said that you were my girlfriend/boyfriend now and that you were done with him. You say YAY with so much excitement then your phone rings and its your mom she says get your ass home so he drives you home and you get inside and see Jon making out with your sibling on the couch. You start crying and run into your room to call Alex and you tell him you cant handle anything anymore. So Alex drives over to your house to prevent any suicide he walks into your house and sees jon and beats the shit out of him. He runs into your room and sees you laying in a puddle of blood and a razor in your hand there was a note that said Alex my love. He opened it and it said...Baby you mean so much to me last night was the best night of my life but i wasnt completely over jon so when i saw him with my sibling I wanted to die. So thats what I did I died with your name in my mind. He looks at the razor and sees that his name was carved in it and he saw the marks on your arm and saw that you carved his name. So he picked up the razor gave you a kiss and returned the favor by carving your name into his wrist. You died together now you know that Alex was your true love. Sorry you didnt have a happy ending but it was still cute.
You begin to call out number two and right as you say tuh he jumps up and says YAY I knew you would get my number. With all of his excitement he runs into the closet without you. You look around confused and he runs back out and says sorry but I been waiting forever to meet you!!! And you say ok ok ok chill lets go and he entangles his fingers into yours and you look confused and he says smile smile smile and he starts tickling you and you smile and giggle he says oh my gosh You should smile more often it looks good on you. And your giggle is adorable. I knew I did good. And you look at him like Huh?!?! and he says I knew I did good when my heart told me I loved you. You smile and start blushing. He turns the closet light off and goes to kiss you but you back away and say sorry but Im scared of the dark he says oh my gosh baby Im sorry I didnt know you say its ok So he looks at you and closes his eyes and leans in to kiss you. You lean in and kiss him and when your lips meet you close your eyes and he turned the light out and held on to you. You opened your eyes and started to freak out and he says dont worry baby I got you your safe with me. So you close your eyes and he kisses you again and he says it shouldnt be that dark to you. You ask why he says because if you feel the same way about me as I do you, you should see the fireworks when we kiss. You start to blush and smile and he says baby I dont know why you dont smile more its beautiful. You giggle and sit on the floor with him and you put your head on his sholder and start to fall asleep and right as you doze off he wispers baby do you want to be mine forever? You jump up and say If you promis to love me no matter what. He says of course and you say then yes I will love you forever and I want to be with you forever. He says good because you are the brightest star in the sky the reason the sun shines brighter the reason I believe in love and the reason I believe in forever. So he drives you back to his house and you guys hug and kiss and cuddle. You date for 6 months before you tell him that your pregnant and he goes to Kay jewlers and buys you an engagement ring and tells you to meet you at the beach. So you go to the beach and hes already there and he has a little love thing set up theres blankets laid out with your favorite food and candles are lit and he has a telescope set up and he started a fire (remembering your scared of the dark and wanted to set a mood). You and your pregnant self walks up to him and gives him a hug and a kiss and he says baby you know I love you and want to be with you forever. He gets down on one knee and proposes you say of course and happy tears run down your face. He says thats not all. Look in the telescope and its pointed at the brightest star in the sky and he says I told you, you were the brightest star in the sky and gives a certificate from the international star registry and you see your name on it you drop to the ground happy and he says baby I love you and always will. You start to eat and your water breaks so you go to the hospital and have a baby boy named after Ben. His full name is Benjamin Troy (last name here) jr. Aww so sweet
  You reach in the hat and pull out number three you see Cory the guy you have had a crush on forever stand up. He walks over to you and says come on chickie lets do this. You blush and say ok lets go. You walk into the closet and sit on the floor. He sits next to you and gently kisses you, you say stop and he asks whats wrong you tell him that your ex Carl beat you and you broke up with him for it. He looks at you sad ness in his eyes then he gets up and runs out of the closet, you forgot that he was friends with Carl and he never knew that Carl beat you. You run out of the closet after him to stop him but by the time you get out there hes half way accross the street to Carls house.You see him hit the door hard with his fists, oyu try to stop him but you can't because the door is already open and Cory is beating the hell out of him asking if he likes to hit girls and why not hit him insted. Carl is sent to the hospital for a few weeks. You kiss Cory and you go back to his house and he takes your skirt off and is shoked by how bright  your florescent thong is. He slips on a condom and you should know what happens. Three months later you realize that the condom broke and your pregnant. You tell him and he gets so excited. You go to the doctor and learn that you had a miscariage. Your depressed for weeks then he proposes you say yes and get married on Halloween and made everyone come in a costume. OHHH YEAHHH....You keep trying to have kids and you successfully have a set of triplets.
OK I love #3 he is deffinetly my choose I don't know about you guy!

sorry if this are all about emo guys they are just hot is all!
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Ellamarie1999 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2015
Nice work, but I would of liked to see some diolog of the actual characters talking...not just 'Your mom called she said to get your ass home right now' for me, I would of enjoyed it more if the diolog layout was more like this 'Your phone rings, you quickly apologize to Alex and answer. "____ get your ass home right now!"'

Do you guys understand..?
TicciTobyisANeko Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015  Student General Artist
I luv them all! But if I had to pick just one it would be #3
odyessythekiller Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Artist
I entirely love them all tbh w/ you! lol
Yami22905 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
1 sad but lovely
2 sweet!!!
3 love the ending!Nuzzles Yami plz 
maryjames14 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Student General Artist
i think #3 because well same thing happened not the prego thing but the "beat the shit out of" thing 
Ratachewy Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG, me! but all of my friends think im weird for it... But it is awsome to find someone with simular tastes! My pick is #2 story, and #3 looks.
MyUnicornAteMyDog Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013
lol I love emo .-. they are hot as hell *cough cough* to me at least.
FairyTail-Alchemist Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
me too :3 my friends think im crazy 
Ratachewy Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oO0RyuuHeartsYou0Oo Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i loved three!
Badgerkai Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ratachewy Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Broken711 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
3rd one
stonerdino Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
i love the 3rd one! :) florescent thong........;)
pandasrule900 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011
omg that is so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
headphonesxconverse Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:*D I think I;m gonna-- TOO LATE! *bawling in happiness*
PinkEyedCat Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
i pic # 3
harleysmonster Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011
1 and 2 we my fav but if i had to choose it would be number 1 loved it!!
JmangaAartisticM Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011
the first one is so romantic!! i love emo guys and this is really amazing!!!
amazinglyashlynn13 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Hmm. Two (Ben) was my favorite. It was really sweet and terribly cute!!! Bravo :D
demyxandzexion4eva Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student General Artist
i'd want alex, passion is like everything to me and i'd act the same way if my sister stole a guy from me. so yeah, alex would be the one for me. i'm the kind of guy who wants someone to love me as much as they can.
olherrera Featured By Owner May 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
omg omg 2# i love it
XHushHushX Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
hey the i have a wierd story about the guy in the purple. (alex) my friend made up this whole lie about him bein this kid damian and she texted me sayin she was damian. i didnt believe her at first but then she sent me a pic of him set in black and white. a few weeks later, i found this pic on google images and found out that she lied about the whole thing. she eventually went on creating these imaginary people named astor, sage, jamez, rikki, and alex (not knowing that i knew the truth) and started making up stories about them in her life. i told her that i know the truth and i did it very nicely. she said that she was sorry and i forgave her, but when i saw her a few hours later, she acted defensivly and was being rude. pretty wierd, huh? any way i loved the story. it reminded me of romeo and juliet.
Kyoiism Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
These pictures (atleast, 1 and 3) are of Andy Six... so when I read this, I envisioned him in everything xD

Patchsgirl14 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
tht waz amazing
Edwardpie7 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010
VioletLuna Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG #1 is sooo sweet! :D I also liked #3 though.....XD I loooove emo guys. THEY ARE SOOOOO HOT!! Especially those eyes framed in dark black eyeliner and those seductive smiles.....*squeals*
Zelda-1987-2010 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
i love emo guys, they are the most sexiest and sensitive type of guy. :DD
strawberrytayler Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
i LOVE #1 i think its sweet but im not emo or whatever -.-*
xXxFallenDreamerxXx Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
id prefer a mix of #1 and #3 lolz. im just me like that tho lolz.
dederebelde Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
#2 is the best
crenshaw12 Featured By Owner May 22, 2010
lol #3 is one of the best (minus the triplets) but i like #1 too
Lerrean Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2010   Artist
I loved #3 it was my fave;P
vampire-chick-2402 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2010
you're a dumbass. just sayin.
JJPixels Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010   Digital Artist
Cory is Andy AHH OMG!!!!

HE IS LIKE MY HUSBAND! (well i wish haha)
CatWildAtom Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2010
1 was so romantic
2 was so cute
and 3 was so sweet
lolbroger Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2010
PapaShaddix Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
Wow I love 3, sad but it was great. I loved number one, that was was teary eyed D: but it was beautiful! Just made me weirded out because I liked someone named Jon and he was a jackass to me then I like someone named Alex O_o Ah well XD LOVEDIT!
Crazysauce Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
love them all but number 1s my total fave!!
kota-2014-4ever Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2009
haha I have to say I like number one the best even if it is a screwed up version of romeo and juliet I fingd it romantic=]
emoraine88 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2009
Kendra-Heartbreaker Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2009
:heart: i LOVE the Emo Version of Romeo And Juliet (#1) It was so cute!~Kendra Heartbreaker
vampire-chick-2402 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2010
you're dumbass and you probably haven't even read romeo and juliet!
Kendra-Heartbreaker Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2010
no need to go and call me a only 13 so no i havent even read romeo and juliet.and im in 7th grade so pwnage.and i've only watched the ANIME version of romeo and juliet thanku very much ^.^
vampire-chick-2402 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2010
that is hardly the same.
Kendra-Heartbreaker Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
thats what YOU think
vampire-chick-2402 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
no. thats what i know actually
Kendra-Heartbreaker Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
fine be that way!
multimedia-ami Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2009
BrokenAngel333 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009
So I'm going with number one all the way! It was soooo cute <3 amazing job!
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